Sometimes Even Mermaids Lose Their Way

Topic: Thoughts (226 words, 4 comments)

Here is my all-time favorite Pablo Neruda poem, Fable of the Mermaid and the Drunks (for those of you who remember the Il Postino film soundtrack featuring readings of Neruda poems by various celebrities, you'll recall that this one was read by Ethan Hawke).

Although Neruda ends it with the mermaid swimming towards death, I always took comfort in thinking she returned to her beloved ocean and, in "death", experienced a type of true Mermaid Rebirth.

All those men were there inside,

when she came in totally naked.

They had been drinking: they began to spit.

Newly come from the river, she knew nothing.

She was a mermaid who had lost her way.

The insults flowed down her gleaming flesh.

Obscenities drowned her golden breasts.

Not knowing tears, she did not weep tears.

Not knowing clothes, she did not have clothes.

They blackened her with burnt corks and cigarette stubs,

and rolled around laughing on the tavern floor.

She did not speak because she had no speech.

Her eyes were the colour of distant love,

her twin arms were made of white topaz.

Her lips moved, silent, in a coral light,

and suddenly she went out by that door.

Entering the river she was cleaned,

shining like a white stone in the rain,

and without looking back she swam again

swam towards emptiness, swam towards death.

Reader Comments

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Comment from Tsevdos John (http://www.tsevdos.com)

Impressive one!!! I always enjoy sad poems / lyrics... Don't know why...

PS : Hello from Greece, darling! (and be optimistic for a while ;-)

2.

Comment from Anonymous

Remember "the sun will come up tomorrow..."

3.

Comment from John Wells (http://www.johndwells.com)

I think it's beautiful... and agree with you, that it isn't "death" at all that she's swimming towards. What is beautiful is how her purity and innocence shielded her from the corruption and cruelty of the drunks. Simply by returning to her waters, "she was cleaned".

And perhaps the emptiness and death is really about the drunks. Perhaps it points to what lies in their destiny, as they have lost their innocence and purity long ago.

I'm definitely no literary genius, it's just how I'd like to think of things. xoxo

----

"...bet your bottom dollar that tomorrow..."

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Comment from shnarla

I agree with John. He said it beautifully. The familiar waters protect the mermaid from all

evil.

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